Very pretty yet haunting scene. I really like the tattered clothes of the male figure, and the moonlight streaming in through the window.
I don't have much for suggestions on this because I think you did a great job. Maybe darken the areas in shadow, like the stuff in the background (if the moonlight and the sparklies are the only light source, I would think the stuff in the background would be in heavier shadows)
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I don't have much for suggestions on this because I think you did a great job. Maybe darken the areas in shadow, like the stuff in the background (if the moonlight and the sparklies are the only light source, I would think the stuff in the background would be in heavier shadows)
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